Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. In your letter, you should tell: why you think the rent shouldn't be increased what you will do if it is increased

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Dear

Mr.

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Rudyard, I am writing

this

letter with regard to the rise in the

rent

for flat number 27, Green Avenue building. My name is

shakyb

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shaky

qureshi

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Qureshi

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and I have been residing at

this

apartment for a year now. Currently, I am a student at

the

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Lincoln College, London.

Moreover

, my family could pay for my tuition fees only and the rest of

necessities

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are handled by me. Since I work part-time at a restaurant as a waiter, so my salary is

minumum

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minimum

and in

that

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I have to manage my

rent

, food and commuting

cost

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costs

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Therefore

, if there is an extension in the

rent

of the cost, it shall be very difficult for me to manage.

However

, If you insist on extending the

rent

amount,

then

I will have to work overtime and miss a few lectures in colleges every week to pay you

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because the amount left with me after paying the

rent

would not be sufficient to buy food. I am hoping that you could understand my situation and act

accordingly

. Thanking you. Yours truly,

Shakyb

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Shakib

Qureshi

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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The Closing

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