Your landlord is asking to increase the rent. Write a letter to him. In your letter, you should tell: why you think the rent shouldn't be increased what you will do if it is increased

Dear
Mr.
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Rudyard, I am writing
this
letter with regard to the rise in the
rent
for flat number 27, Green Avenue building. My name is
shakyb
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shaky
qureshi
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Qureshi
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and I have been residing at
this
apartment for a year now. Currently, I am a student at
the
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Lincoln College, London.
Moreover
, my family could pay for my tuition fees only and the rest of
necessities
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are handled by me. Since I work part-time at a restaurant as a waiter, so my salary is
minumum
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minimum
and in
that
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I have to manage my
rent
, food and commuting
cost
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costs
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.
Therefore
, if there is an extension in the
rent
of the cost, it shall be very difficult for me to manage.
However
, If you insist on extending the
rent
amount,
then
I will have to work overtime and miss a few lectures in colleges every week to pay you
,
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because the amount left with me after paying the
rent
would not be sufficient to buy food. I am hoping that you could understand my situation and act
accordingly
. Thanking you. Yours truly,
Shakyb
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Shakib
Qureshi
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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