Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from international competitions. To what extent do you agree?

The martial art should be banned from international competition that what some people proposing about

this

kind of pastime to avoid violence watched throughout a combat. In my opinion, I disagree with that point. Looking to the positive side of

this

sort of

sport

and how it has a great impact on the player

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First

of all they learn the ethics and how they can control their power as well how they can focus on their aims,

moreover how

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moreover, how

they learn to defend their self and protect and I'm view I can see that type of

sport

is like others

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for instance

football

also

has a violent and the player can hurt the others to achieve their goal which it is the win in the end of the competition. In some cases

that is

true the government needs to ban some kind of martial

sport

that is spreading in some area or in the street which are illegal to practice

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however in

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However in

my

view it

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view, it

is unfair to limit the champion of boxing or karate

for example

to involve in the international one. As a conclusion

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we can transmit a good image of these sports as a defensive

instead

a violent

sport

and have a look at their advantages to learn from them and bypass their disadvantages

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