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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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In current society, there is no denying that most peoples' ideas relies on
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technology
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, without
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 the working process will be more and oversee communication will be neglected. So,
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technology
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 controls every aspect of people’s work in some way. The following paragraphs will analyse the benefits outweighing the disadvantage of IT in our life. One significant advantage is mobile phones and high-speed
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 access devices. With the help of these devices, people can easily order various items through online shopping and save the wastage of shopping time. Another key benefit is that people can stay at home and control the entire security
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 with one device. To illustrate with an example, our bills and booking tickets are handled through the mobile device without reaching out to the specific
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 centres.
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, home security and electronic gadgets are controlled by single
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 because it keeps every data,
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, items to be safe in the storage pack.
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, there are
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 adverse impacts which must be considered. One important issue is that people who work in the office would face several health issues. Owing to spend more time on the
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 and sitting in front of the
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 will cause considerable damage to their health.
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, I had been working as a software designer for three months in IT firm, I spent at least eight hours to work on
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, later I noticed that I had problems with my eyesight due to spending more time on a
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. If I avoid spending more hour on the
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, it will not cause any adverse health issues. To conclude, in my opinion, despite having some negative effects, I believe
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technology
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 provides more benefits to users because it enhances our daily needs and turning our self-better.
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