In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?
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Nowadays in
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India Pakistan
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childrens
to a young person of either sex
children
single sex
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a single sex school
school
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But
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being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
developed
coutries
like a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
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USA, Australia
usa Australia
USA Australia
USA australia
childrens
to a young person of either sex
children
co educational
attended by members of both sexes
coeducational
school
.
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are several Suggestion
There
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as a rational motive for a belief or action
reasons
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In
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a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
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children, especially
childrens especially
children especially
children specialy
children's specialy
co educational
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coeducational
do educational
school
may their
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there
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feeling shame or guilt or embarrassment or remorse
ashamed
shame
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In
such
countries parents not feel
safe to send their girls to Suggestion
don't feel
co educational
Suggestion
Co educational
coeducational
do educational
school
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anything
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educated, they
co educational
attended by members of both sexes
coeducational
school
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together, they
hasitate
in pause or hold back in uncertainty or unwillingness
hesitate
future
to talk with anyone.
In conclusion Suggestion
the future
co education
is education of men and women in the same institutions
coeducation
much important student
can understand each other properlySuggestion
a much important student
.
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