In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowdays in

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Nowadays, in

Nowadays in

some countries like

india pakistan

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India, Pakistan

india Pakistan

India Pakistan

India pakistan

and some gulf countries parents like to send their

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

single sex

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a single sex school

school

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specially to girls.

due

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Due

their thinking or due to their culture

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but

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But

develped

being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful

developed

coutries

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

usa australia

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USA, Australia

usa Australia

USA Australia

USA australia

china parents prefer to send their

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

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co educational

attended by members of both sexes

coeducational

school

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Their

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There

are several

resons

a rational motive for a belief or action

reasons

refers to the speaker or writer

write above

its

the thing named or in question

depends upon the thinking of parents.

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india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

their

in or at that place

there

is some area or village where peoples are not well educated and they always

doupt

the state of being unsure of something

doubt

adopt

dumped

on their

childrens specialy

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children, especially

childrens especially

children especially

children specialy

children's specialy

on the girls they thought that if we send their girls to

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co educational

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Co educational

coeducational

do educational

school

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may

their

in or at that place

there

there there

is chance that they fell in love with boys and choose them as a life partner are may do

any thing

an indefinite thing

anything

wrong in future from which they have to feel

ashame

feeling shame or guilt or embarrassment or remorse

ashamed

shame

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Secondly due

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Secondly, due

to security reasons of their girls

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such

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countries parents

not feel

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don't feel

safe to send their girls to

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co educational

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Co educational

coeducational

do educational

school

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because they always scare that if boys could do

any thing

an indefinite thing

anything

wrong with them like wrong comments

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But in countries like

usa autralia

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USA, Australia

usa Australia

USA Australia

USA autralia

parents are well

educated they

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educated, they

love to send their girls or boys to

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co educational

attended by members of both sexes

coeducational

school

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because

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Because

they thought that if boys and girls can study

together they

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together, they

could learn more from each other and they could not

hasitate

pause or hold back in uncertainty or unwillingness

hesitate

future

Suggestion

the future

to talk with anyone. In conclusion

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co education

education of men and women in the same institutions

coeducation

much important student

Suggestion

a much important student

can understand each other properly

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but as i mention due to illetracy parents send their children to single sex

school

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its harmfull for the children because they could feel shy in future

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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