Some people believe that it is better to live and work in vertical cities. Others, however, think that horizontal cities are better for living and working. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The topic of vertical cities or horizontal cities is still debatable. While a lot of people believe that it is better to live and work in horizontal cities, a couple of believe to live in vertical cities. I

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fall in the majority who believe in horizontal cities. Both of them have their own advantages and disadvantages. In the vertical cities, large population lives in small area of land which means, you can approach or avail any facilities with no impediments. You can reach hospitals, police, schools, and market in no time.

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, saves your precious time which you can utilize somewhere else. You can meet your friends and relatives in no time.

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it has advantages and makes people's

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easier, it brings chaos in future.

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, the

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produces by vehicles will be inside the city and people of the city will inhale it every day and become sick.

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also increase

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global-warming as no trees nearby to absorb it.

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has been observed in decades that more population brings disaster on that land.

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, horizontal cities distribute the population across,

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, you will see lots of trees around individual houses which will absorb the

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created by people and it get's distributed.

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, less

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, global-warming, and healthy

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. Having increases

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is dangerous for not only people, but

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trees and animals. The best way to live

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is to live in peace and harmony with nature. To conclude,

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vertical cities make people's

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easy easier, horizontal cities are better for both people and nature. People should try making horizontal cities rather vertical cities.

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