Some people belive that technology has man made more social. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The nowadays majority of people consider that virtual world helps to people be more active in developing new technology. I totally agree with

this

statement and now

this

essay I will support my opinion with examples.

Firstly

, we know that today everything depends on the modern technology,

in addition

, almost everyone can't figure out problems without it.

Also

the best way of keeping in touch with our dears is social media.We can easily connect with people even if their location is on another planet. Especially today, it's necessary for people who work in a business area, without going or without flying to somewhere they can make their meetings via social networks,

such

as Skype, IMO, Zoom and etc.

Secondly

, as I said below it can connect us anytime with anyone in any corner of the world.

However we

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However, we

use it not only in order to do meetings, but

also

when we want to see our dear persons or when we want to feel our loved one's emotions when they saw each other via Skype.It can make people closer, it can make the distance shorter.

Therefore in

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Therefore, in

my humble opinion, it is very wonderful when you have

such

a helpful app which facilitates us to see our dears overtime if we need.

Also i

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Also, I

Also I

can say that being active in a social world is not bad, vice versa its very useful to our life. Because making good friends, reading, getting new information and exchanging ideas can help us to extend our overview.

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