Some people belive that technology has man made more social. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The nowadays majority of people consider that virtual world helps to people be more active in developing new technology. I totally agree with

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essay I will support my opinion with examples.

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, we know that today everything depends on the modern technology,

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, almost everyone can't figure out problems without it.

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the best way of keeping in touch with our dears is social media.We can easily connect with people even if their location is on another planet. Especially today, it's necessary for people who work in a business area, without going or without flying to somewhere they can make their meetings via social networks,

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as Skype, IMO, Zoom and etc.

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, as I said below it can connect us anytime with anyone in any corner of the world.

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use it not only in order to do meetings, but

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when we want to see our dear persons or when we want to feel our loved one's emotions when they saw each other via Skype.It can make people closer, it can make the distance shorter.

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my humble opinion, it is very wonderful when you have

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a helpful app which facilitates us to see our dears overtime if we need.

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can say that being active in a social world is not bad, vice versa its very useful to our life. Because making good friends, reading, getting new information and exchanging ideas can help us to extend our overview.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

248 words

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Some people belive that technology has man made more social. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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