The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, social media is the best way to interact with new people with different medium.
This
medium is like Facebook Twitter
and Instagram as well. And Accept comma addition
Facebook, Twitter
this
thing is replacing the most of face-to-face contact. In this
essay I will explore the different type of advantages and disadvantages as well.
In the use of Facebook Twitter
and other things are replacing the face-to-face because of social media are being handled by the internet medium. Accept comma addition
Facebook, Twitter
This
things are a way of interacting new people without face-to-face are contact type. Suggestion
These
Facebook Twitter
gives to Accept comma addition
Facebook, Twitter
also
beneficial to people because the people meet the new people without touch. If we meet new people, then
we learn something extraordinary things from them and also
meet the new vibes as well. Although
some disadvantages, like we could not meet face-to-face old friends and distance from them.Like I give my example, I have a some Facebook
friends as well and I meet through them from social media and learn some new things from them. As well. Although
the disadvantages are we never meet them in ever
life, (used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
then
never trust them. Because of some fraud cases are going through the online or social type. The face-to-face meeting gives us to more comfortable then
online media
In conclusion, Over social media use are not beneficial for us and not avoid the face-to-face meeting because conjunction used in comparatives
than
this
thing are more benefits expect the social-media. Obviously the social media are the largest and the best thing in this
century and many benefits for them. I also
agree with this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite