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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon
#life #cycle #species #fish #salmon
The diagram
which
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illustrates
processes
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the processes
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 of
life
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the life
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 cycle of a species of large fish named the
salmon
.
The first step is
 that
,
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 the
salmon
 start
his
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its
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 life as
a
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an
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 egg under the reeds
approximately
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for approximately
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 five to six months in
a
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an
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 upper river with a
slow moving
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slow-moving
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. And
then
 when they became
a
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fry with
measure
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a measure
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 between three and eight
centimeters
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centimetres
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 in length they
are go
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are going
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 to the lower river in a fast flowing approximately for 4 years.
Subsequently
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 the fry became smolt and with a 12-15cm in
length
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 they reach during
this
 time after which migrated to the open sea and there they habited about five years. After five years they reached
to
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the
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apply
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adult size
it
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which
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 means adult
salmon
 from 70 to 76cm. In conclusion, the
salmon
 passed through three areas and the process of becoming mature. Each
of
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habitat place
take
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takes
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 place in
different
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a different
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 aquatic location.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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