The diagram which illustrates processes of life cycle of a species of large fish named the salmon.
The diagram
which
illustrates the processes of the life cycle of a species of large fish named the Correct pronoun usage
apply
salmon
.
The first step is
that,
the Remove the comma
apply
salmon
start his
life as Correct pronoun usage
its
a
egg under the reeds Change the article
an
approximately
five to six months in an upper river with a slow movement. And Change preposition
for approximately
then
when they became a
fry with Correct article usage
apply
measure
between three and eight centimetres in length they are going to the lower river in a fast flowing approximately for 4 years.
Add an article
a measure
Subsequently
the fry became smooth and with a 12-15cm in length they reach during Add a comma
,Subsequently
this
time after which migrated to the open sea and there they habited about five years. After five years they reached to
Change preposition
apply
the
adult size Correct article usage
apply
it
means adult Correct pronoun usage
which
salmon
from 70 to 76cm.
In conclusion, the salmon
passed through three areas and the process of becoming mature. Each of
habitat place takes place in Change preposition
apply
different
aquatic Correct article usage
a different
location
.Fix the agreement mistake
locations
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