Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough. To what extent do you agree with this statement.?

Many people hold the view that if you don’t have enough strong determination, it is hard to find the way to success. From my point of view,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

am not in agreement with

this

statement.

First

and foremost, in order to have success, we all have to strive to train and put the efforts to boost ourselves. Burning passion and determinations strong enough will guide us on the road to take the fruit.

Therefore

, failure is not necessarily due to the lack of willpower

that is

only part. Take as

simple example as

Suggestion

a simple example, as

a simple example as

in football, the athletes

also

have to practise a lot before matches. If they succeed in scoring, it is

also

considered as a victory, but vice

versa it

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versa, it

is called the failure or not? I am sure the loss that time is just temporary and the most important thing is to learn from our own experience and keep trying.

On the other hand

, a variety of objective reasons have harmful ìnluence on the final results. Cited as, many people have ambition so big that it is beyond their competence.

Thus

, how hard they try, they

can not

can not

cannot

accomplish their objects.

Last

but not least, society’s demands, timings and other outside elements

also

decide how much percentage of people’s success. People

therefore

should consider carefully their goals before sacrificing time and efforts for them. To conclude, we are creators of our future and if we want something, we should do everything to obtain it.

Otherwise we

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Otherwise, we

may always regret it that.