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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Due to innovation and modern technology, a current news can easily access through television and internet. One of the heated debates nowadays, is that weather the journalists are true or not to their responsibilities and ethics. Some people believe, that they are providing the factual
information
, while other commenters disagree with the latter view. The writer, believe that not all journalists are true to their responsibilities and ethics, the reasons will discuss below, followed by a conclusion. To start with, not all journalists are given factual
information
 to the public, because some of the
information
 they gathered are not reliable and invalidated.
In addition
, they are just feeding the viewer base on their investigations.
Hence
, it leads to misinformations.
For instance
, one of the companies known as ABS CBN, in Manila, Philippines broadcasted an incorrect news on the television and radio,
thus
 it leads to confusion and misinformations.
Furthermore
, there are other journalists that are biased when it come to providing
information
, because they are influenced by the other people, like a well known person, politicians, and wealthy people. Once these people ask for a favour to endorse and promote them,
then
 the journalist can easily convince the people due to the kind of job they have.
For instance
, during the election campaigned in our province which is in Cabagan, Isabela, and one of the political was endorsed by the journalists, who gives positive knowledge to the citizen and he deserve to be in a position, despite of the previous negative background.
Hence
, he won the position To recapitulate, we cannot deny that they are other new reporters that are still providing knowledge based on fact,
however
, I believe that not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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