You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter explain why you want to leave your current job describe what kind of job you are looking for ask for some help or advice

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Dear Shweta, Hope you are well, it has been a long time since we

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spoke, the reason for

this

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letter is to get your opinion on a matter

that is

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giving me some trouble. Recently, there was a change in management in my company and the transition is rather unpleasant as they are carrying out mass layoffs it is a matter of time until they close my department and fire me as well, I came across your post on LinkedIn where you posted that you are looking for an Electrical Engineer to add to your team, I believe my experience and work

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can be an asset to your team.

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, I am keeping my options open and currently looking for a team leader role in a manufacturing plant, if you have any leads on

this

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kind of role feel free to forward them to me.

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if you believe any course or skill that I could acquire that can give me an edge over the other

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please notify me so I can start working on them. Looking forward to your response, Krushang.

bhat.shweta17Fri Jan 31 2025

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coherence cohesion

Improve paragraph structure by ensuring each paragraph contains a single clear idea or theme.

task achievement

Include a bit more detail in your request for advice or assistance to fully cover the task response.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are well-crafted, setting a friendly tone appropriate for a letter to a friend.

task achievement

The writing tone is very friendly and suitable for a personal letter to a friend.

task achievement

The explanation for leaving the current job is clear and provides sufficient context.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

185 words

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