IELTS Band 9 Essay: In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

After the

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World War, the

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of overpopulation became a pressing

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in

many fields, especially in the central cities.

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problem

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has been addressed by many Sociologists who argued the suggestions of building houses or buildings

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in

the

countryside

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.

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, I opine

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solution is alarming for two reasons, which is that there will not be a pure

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for rest, and the other reason is that the

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is far from the vital places in the city

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as schools and work. So I

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, Central parts of the cities crowded by populations, workers,

polluation

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

and factories. For that, People who live in those conditions need opportunities of a leisure time in a space away from noisiness. Employees or the students who

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live

in the central part of the

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city

could not have the adequate

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near the cities with nature or a quiet

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, if the

countryside

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developed as the central part or as

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the big

cities.

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, the workforce will suffer of stress and maybe some health problems that will effect on the economic productivity of the country. To give an example of the

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, it is worth noticing the New York City Park. Despite that, the park is human made; it had many corners that full of natural spaces. We could imagine the risks, which will face the people if the New York’s Park disappear. The people would spend their life working or around the same environment which could make many

psychologic

mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature

psychological

problems. On the other hands, the long distance between the inhibitions and

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of them or themselves

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workplace going to be a

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, if the

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was crowded

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with

workers, employees, or students. To explain that, we can look back to the urbanization since it arrived the traffic

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boomed to be the obstacle that every morning employee suffer in the big cities.

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that, all you can imagine how difficult to arrive your work if you live in

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as New York, and you have to arrive early at 8 pm,

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that's

so hard!

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, there are many large companies

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as Microsoft Corporation, requiring its employees to live close to the company in the city

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

, to overcome the difficulties related to traffic every morning. In conclusion, despite many

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of or relating to demography

demographics

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argued the sociologists about living in

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countryside

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the countryside

and build people’s houses around there, I opine that the

countryside

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has to be the

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for relaxing time, full of nature characteristics, and without any urbanization characteristics. The reasons, which made me

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think

of that, are the leisure time for the workforce or students has to be in a pure space and

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not easy to find if the

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disappear

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disappears

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is the traffic

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, which will increase dramatically if the workforce or students lived far away of their workplace or schools.