IELTS Band 9 Essay: In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

After the

Second

World War, the

problem

of overpopulation became a pressing

problem

on

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in

many fields, especially in the central cities.

This

problem

has been addressed by many Sociologists who argued the suggestions of building houses or buildings

on

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in

the

countryside

.

Moreover

, I opine

this

solution is alarming for two reasons, which is that there will not be a pure

place

for rest, and the other reason is that the

place

is far from the vital places in the city

such

as schools and work. So I

this

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Initially

, Central parts of the cities crowded by populations, workers,

polluation

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

and factories. For that, People who live in those conditions need opportunities of a leisure time in a space away from noisiness. Employees or the students who

lives

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live

in the central part of the

cities

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city

could not have the adequate

place

near the cities with nature or a quiet

place

, if the

countryside

developed as the central part or as

the biggest

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the big

cities.

Furthermore

, the workforce will suffer of stress and maybe some health problems that will effect on the economic productivity of the country. To give an example of the

countryside

, it is worth noticing the New York City Park. Despite that, the park is human made; it had many corners that full of natural spaces. We could imagine the risks, which will face the people if the New York’s Park disappear. The people would spend their life working or around the same environment which could make many

psychologic

mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature

psychological

problems. On the other hands, the long distance between the inhibitions and

there

of them or themselves

their

workplace going to be a

problem

, if the

countryside

was crowded

by

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with

workers, employees, or students. To explain that, we can look back to the urbanization since it arrived the traffic

problem

boomed to be the obstacle that every morning employee suffer in the big cities.

Besides

that, all you can imagine how difficult to arrive your work if you live in

megacity

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majesty, such

majesty such

such

as New York, and you have to arrive early at 8 pm,

that

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that's

so hard!

Therefore

, there are many large companies

such

as Microsoft Corporation, requiring its employees to live close to the company in the city

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

, to overcome the difficulties related to traffic every morning. In conclusion, despite many

demographical

of or relating to demography

demographics

demographic

argued the sociologists about living in

countryside

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the countryside

and build people’s houses around there, I opine that the

countryside

has to be the

place

for relaxing time, full of nature characteristics, and without any urbanization characteristics. The reasons, which made me

thinks

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think

of that, are the leisure time for the workforce or students has to be in a pure space and

that is

not easy to find if the

countryside

disappear

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disappears

.

Accept space

.

The

second

is the traffic

problem

, which will increase dramatically if the workforce or students lived far away of their workplace or schools.