Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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What can a person’s appearance tell us? Some people claim that they can infer a person’s
culture
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and personality from the clothes a person wears on a regular basis.
This
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essay will discuss why it’s not always possible to identify
culture
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and character from the clothes despite the fact that people wear clothes based on the society they belong to. People in different parts of the world dress differently. Their dresses are based on the
culture
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they born and brought up in and the society they live in. In
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
,
for example
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, most of the married women wear saris
instead
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of dresses or pants and shirts and they apply
sindoor
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, red powder, in their forehead. One can easily identify
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whether
a woman is married or not from the appearance of that woman.
Sindoor
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in the forehead
also
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suggests that the woman respects her husband a lot.
Conversely
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, all the people do not always dress the same way in all the situation. People wear clothes
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based on the job they do and their interests and goals. People who work in multinational company wear formal clothes at their workplace irrespective of their
culture
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. My mother,
for example
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, used to wear sari at home and formal clothes at her
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
when she was working in the company. Nobody from her workplace can infer her
culture
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or personality from her clothes because she was always in office formal attire. In
this
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world, people wear all the types of clothes.
Although
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people wear clothes based on the
culture
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they belong to, I disagree that it is
posible
capable of happening or existing
possible
to understand people’s
culture
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and traits from the clothes they wear all the time.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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