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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?

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Nowadays, many people have big problems to find
balance
 between
work
life
 and their lives. The business world
is required
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requires
 more and more
time
 to hard
worker
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work
 and be emotional health is totally necessary. Not only a family is feeling
that but
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that, but
also
 the human relations,
for example
, there
are
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is
 a lot of people with poor mental health primarily in
big city
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the big city
big cities
, when is a
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 source. To find
balance it
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balance, it
 is
necessary provide
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necessary, provide
 priorities, manage the
time
 and be
focus
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focused
at
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on
work
.
First
 of all, the
work
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worker
spend
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spends
 much
time
 during a day.
In addition
 to travel to
office
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the office
 and for back home. The getting out of
this
 situation is provide priorities, because there are not only
work
life
, but
also
 the social
life
.
Furthermore
, the business world occupied much
time
 in a day, as a
consequence demand
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consequence, demand
manage
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manages
 the
time
 and don't overestimate that.
Such
 as organized all tasks and obligations, naturally think
to
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of
 during the weekend be with family and relax.
Finally
,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 point totally important to
balance
 a
life
is be
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is to be
 knowledge about focus, whereas there are many things to disturb
mind
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the mind
.
For instance
,
person
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a person
people
the person
persons
 who
work
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works
 with technology and internet, exist a lot of advertisements to take focus at
work
. For that reason, the big
work
 actually is
know
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knowing
 how
balance
 a
life
 to be healthy and prepared to go forward,
then
 don’t
forgot
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forget
 about yourself, provide priorities, manage the
time
 and be
focus
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focused
.

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