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The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London 2000-2010.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London 2000-2010.
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The graph illustrates
last
Linking Words
 ten
yearly
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years
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 in London three sort
product
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of product
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 increased shows. In
general
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this
Linking Words
 graph Buns level very slowly raising after coming down and residues, to
this
Linking Words
 including Sofia and Cake Lab upward go out. Buns in 2000 till 2005 slightly raising.After
in
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apply
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2005 till 2007 quietly come down,
between
Correct word choice
and between
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 2007 and 2010
fall
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fell
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 gradually. Sofia between 2000 and 2005 no change remain 2005 and 2007 go up minimally.After a climb dramatic increased cake lab two during the year, a rise moderate
afterward
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afterwards
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 a climb significant one plain stand steady

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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