You have just spend a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him that what the coat looks like, where do you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.

Dear Piiki Hope you are doing well. I forgot my

coat

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back at your home when I left the other day. I am writing

this

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epistle to you so that you can look for. It is one of the most expensive coats I have.

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, it has black fur at the back and Gucci written all over the

coat

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, the colour should be

mix

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a mix

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of both brown and black.

Moreover

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, I have my diamond chain hanging on the left pocket.

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, I am not quite sure where I left it, as far as I can remember

last

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time I saw the

coat

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was in your room beside the door near your

wardorbe

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wardrobe

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, the

coat

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has my wallet and all of my banking cards

along with

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my keys.

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, if you could find the

coat

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and let me know when you can return it to my house or if you would like me to come and grab it. Looking forward to hearing from you Best Regards Janat

jotkaurwarraich

Mar 18, 2026

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task response

For task response: You answer all parts, but some details are not clear. Say the coat place in a more clear way.

task response

For task response: Use a more natural letter style. Some words like 'epistle' are too formal and not common.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: Your ideas are in a good order, but some link words are not used well. Keep sentences short and clear.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: Check small grammar and word form errors, because they make the message less easy to follow.

task response

For task response: You cover the coat look, place, things inside, and how to get it back.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: The letter has clear parts: opening, details, place, and closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

168 words

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