Environmental degradation is a major world problem. What causes this problem and what can we do to prevent it?

There is no doubt that the
environment
is in trouble. Factories burn fossil
fuels which
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fuels, which
produce acid rains, and
this
kills trees. At the same time, greenhouse gases rise into the air and contribute to global warming, which threatens to melt the polar ice caps.
Meanwhile farmers
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Meanwhile, farmers
clear huge areas of rain forests in places
such
as Amazon to produce feeding land for cattle or produce wood for building. Rivers and oceans are so heavily contaminated by industrial waste that it is no longer safe to go swimming. Cars pump out poisonous
emissions which
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emissions, which
we all have to breathe in. Poaching and overfishing are killing off millions of animals, including whales, elephants and other endangered species. In fact, all around us, all living things large and small which comprise our
friendly balanced
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friendly, balanced
ecosystem are being systematically destroyed by human greed and thoughtlessness. There is a lot we can all do,
however
, to help prevent
this
. The easiest thing, of course, is to recycle waste material
such
as paper and glass so that we can use it again. We should
also
check that the things we buy from supermarkets are packaged in biodegradable packaging which decomposes easily. At the same time, we should make a conscious effort to avoid foods which are genetically modified (at least until someone proves that they are safe both for us and for the
environment
). If you are truly committed to protecting the
environment
, of course, you should only buy organic fruit and vegetables, safe in the knowledge that they have been naturally cultivated.
Finally
, of course, we should buy a small car that uses unleaded petrol which is less harmful to the
environment
or, even better, make more use of public transport. The serious environmentalists,
however
, do much more. They are aware of the global issues evolved and will actively involve themselves in conservation programmes by making sure our forests are kept safe for future generations. They will oppose activities which are harmful to animals,
such
as battery farming. And they will campaign to keep the Green belts around our towns and cities free from new buildings. We cannot all be as committed as them, but we can at least do our own little bit at grass roots level. We, as humans, have inherited the Earth, but that doesn’t mean we can do whatever we like with it
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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