Your story must begin with this sentence: As soon as I found the old letter, I knew what I had to do.

"As soon as I found the old letter, I knew what I had to do."
said
Suggestion
Said
Thomas, a middle age man, vehemently. All what happened was when his beloved wife left
this
destitute man on his own without financial aid. The couple had a precocious son, but by dint of the father's condition, he could not pursue his academic goal.
Therefore
, he chose to stay with his affluent mother. Never did the offspring know his imbecile action obliquely murdered the father. After the divorce, the despondent Thomas sought to find the aforementioned letter, to which he alluded was a gift from a stranger claimed to be a psychic on his journey to Austria. After hours of searching in his apartment in vain, he
finally
found it-the letter. To his astonishment, everything written in it was the steps of a ritual. The ritual was said to bring fortune to the person doing it at the cost of his own life if done incorrectly. Despite having followed all the instructions, there was one thing he could not do- put an end to his wife.
Thus
, he had to accept a barbaric fate.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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