Today many parents force rhier children to study all kinds of courses in the early age . What are the reason behind this.? What effects do you think this practice would bring to gbs children?

According to
modern era
Suggestion
the modern era
, everything is changing day by day.
Nowdays
Suggestion
Nowadays
, parents are forced
thier
of them or themselves
their
tier
there
children to select difficult courses. They
can not
can not
cannot
give the chance to
thier
of them or themselves
their
tear
tour
children
for
Suggestion
to
show
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
hidden talent. Now
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will enunciate my views on
this
situation in the following paragraphs.
Definately
, parents are forced
thier
of them or themselves
their
tier
there
children to accept difficult courses during
thier
of them or themselves
their
studies. There are ample reasons of
this
problem.
First
of all, they become
thier
of them or themselves
their
children superior as compared to other
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
.
Moreover
, they will
nurturing
Suggestion
nurture
thier
of them or themselves
their
children for defeat in
compitative
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
era. Because, In
this
era,
Fully knowledgeable person
Suggestion
a Fully knowledgeable person
Fully knowledgeable people
can be survived. Apart from that,
parenfs
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
do these
this
for
betterment
Suggestion
the betterment
of
thier
of them or themselves
their
children
Suggestion
child's
children's
future.
On the contrary
, there are many bad effects proved of these things
.
Accept space
.
Like, children lose
thier
of them or themselves
their
creativity from
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
mind
.
Accept space
.
They become a part of
rat race
Suggestion
the rat race
.
In addition
to
this
, every child is born with
thier
of them or themselves
their
own talent. They forget
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
hidden talent which proved bad for
ua
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
as well as
world
Suggestion
the world
.
Furthermore
, they will not co-
operatd
direct or control; projects, businesses, etc.
operate
with others. Because, they could not interact with
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
type of people during
thier
of them or themselves
their
difficult studies.
However
, it
put
Suggestion
puts
bad impact
Suggestion
a bad impact
on the development of the child. Parents put
lot
Suggestion
lots
of weight of study on the tender age of the child.. In the conclusion, parents should not force
thier
of them or themselves
their
children to select their courses.They should give chance to fly in the whole world. It
will proved
Suggestion
will prove
benificial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for the future of the children.
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