A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.

Dear Lincy, I hope you are keeping fine. As I have hinted on

last

Friday mine and Joseph’s leaves are approved for one month. We will be leaving from here by Thursday evening 8 in the evening.

Flight

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The flight

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is at 12

O’ Clock

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O'Clock

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in the morning. As the keys are already with you, it is not necessary that you

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apply

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come. There are some perishable food items like yoghurt, egg, milk, cheese, vegetables, meat and fish in the refrigerator. Please make sure to collect those and consume

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them at

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the earliest. Please

double check

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that all the switches are off.

That is

all about the rooms and appliances. Regarding the aquarium, feed the fishes

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apply

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every two days. Please make sure to change the water every week.

is about

watering

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the watering

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of indoor plants, the water sprayer is

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the balcony. If you can do it

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every two days, that would be better. Please make sure to start the car

upon

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your convenience ask the security to wash regularly, Key is hanged in the kitchen If anything please Watsapp in the UAE number + 971556980084 or call on + 919961373964. See you on April 27th. Thanks & regards Maria

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

199 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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