WRITING TASK 1 Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Mark, I received your letter
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morning where you complained about the frequent noise coming out of my flat. Let me start by explaining the reason for
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I introduced to you at your wedding recently moved in with me. She is quite intrusive and loves to
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house at every given opportunity which drives me crazy because I get back from work and have to look for either my running shoes, my video
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or other personal things, she has a way of forgetting where she kept these items and we get into
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arguments, I will spare you
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details. I apologise for the frustration
this
has brought to Suzan and yourself, especially at night when you should be asleep. To make up for
this
, I have arranged movie tickets for the four of us. To ensure Barbara doesn’t intrude and piss me off any longer when I get back from work, I’ve decided to lock my personal stuff in the spare room as I dash off to work in the morning. Thanks for choosing to write to
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of calling the authorities when you should have. Regards to all. Tomi

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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