Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accesible . Do you think this will be a positive or negative development.

Around the globe it
Suggestion
Around the globe, it
is believed that more adults will perform their jobs
form
a giver or sender
from
home
and more children will pursue their studies from
home
because of the easy accessibility and fair cost of computer technology.
This
essay will discuss both the
positive negative
Accept comma addition
positive, negative
impact followed by own opinion in the conclusion.
Geeting
Suggestion
Getting
to work from
home
can be a blessing to those employers who struggle hard to manage
thier
of them or themselves
their
time
balancing their personal and professional life as one has to travel to their workplace to get their jobs done.
This
will save one's
time
and money as they can efficiently perform their task staying at their
home
by which working mothers can look after
thier
of them or themselves
their
home
and job at the same
time
. To, illustrate
this
, a recent study indicated that companies which provide work from
home
facility to their employees feel more motivated to perform well in their jobs.
On the contrary
, the same facility for children will prove to be a disaster as
ths
denotes a person or thing
this
these
would act as a communication barrier between teachers and children. Children learn different things from their school surroundings which cannot be acquired if they are only confined to computers because a teacher physically can act a constant motivator on different aspects of a child like
descipline
a branch of knowledge
discipline
disciplines
, intellectual development and
also
refining a child's creativity which a computer can fail in doing so.
For example
, an assessment given online to
achild
Suggestion
a child
compared to the one
givenin
Suggestion
given in
a physical classroom would not have a same drive of accomplishing it because a
chind
a young person of either sex
child
chined
is not scared of his teacher physically. In
concusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, worldwide easy
accessibilty
the quality of being at hand when needed
accessibility
of computer technology has both positive as negative impacts. I, think for
adults it
Accept comma addition
adults, it
is
benefecial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
in terms of saving money and
time
for work. While, for the children it would be better off without machinery education because they need to be physically engaged in the education process.

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