It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Some argue that
punishments
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children
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However
, there are two light-type Linking Words
punishments
that might be effective in certain situations, and educators and parents should be allowed to use them.
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punishments
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cause
more damage to Use synonyms
good
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children
. The most important one is that aggression might Use synonyms
cause
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are being punish
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are punishing
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as they usually get distorted assumptions regarding conflicts. Change preposition
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, recent studies show that yelling at Linking Words
children
may Use synonyms
cause
low-confidence issues, anxiety, and sadness. Use synonyms
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children
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the cause
cause
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causes
consequence
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consequences
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due to
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for example
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However
, there are two types of Linking Words
punishments
that parents and educators should be Use synonyms
permited
to do in certain situations. Correct your spelling
permitted
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TV
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children
to follow schedules. Use synonyms
For instance
, when youngsters do not do their homework, parents should take their favourite toy away to show it is time to focus on Linking Words
studies
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their studies
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, telling kids to clean their disorder would Linking Words
also
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deal
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to deal
This
may help them understand how they are supposed to do things and not make the same mistakes again, as there might be consequences to it.
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children
are that it might Use synonyms
cause
negative effects on their mental health and learning by Use synonyms
cause
and consequence is often more effective. Use synonyms
However
, there are some light-type Linking Words
punishments
that familiars and teachers should be allowed to do, Use synonyms
such
as toy restrictions and making kids correct their mistakes whenever possible.Linking Words
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