The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

The two line graphs illustrate the production and the
demand
of
steel
as well as the
number
of people working in the
steel
industry between January and December in 2010 in the UK. The amounts of
steel
are expressed in
million
tonnes and the
number
workers are expressed in
thousand
workers. Overall, the production of
steel
, the
demand
for it and the
number
of workers in the industry experienced a sharp
fell
Suggestion
fall
after the August of 2016. The worker count had another fall before that, in February. The amount of
steel
produced and the amount of
steel
required were fluctuated around 4
million
and 2.5
million
tonnes
, respectively between
Suggestion
, respectively, between
January and August of 2016. After September, both the manufacture and the
demand
reduced dramatically, so much so that the
demand
ended up close to zero, but it increased again to 2
million
tonnes in December. The
number
of people working in the
steel
industry was 5
thousand
in January, but after February it fell sharply to 3
thousand
and remained relatively steady afterwards until August.
However after
Accept comma addition
However, after
August, it started reducing again and ended up around 1
thousand
workers.

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  • Global connectivity
  • Cross-cultural understanding
  • Tourism boost
  • Carbon emissions
  • Environmental degradation
  • Overtourism
  • Local resources
  • Infrastructure strain
  • Travel accessibility
  • Economic backgrounds
  • Commercialization
  • Dilution of local cultures
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