The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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The two line graphs illustrate the production and the
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of
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as well as the
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of people working in the
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industry between January and December in 2010 in the UK. The amounts of
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are expressed in
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tonnes and the
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workers are expressed in
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workers. Overall, the production of
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, the
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for it and the
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of workers in the industry experienced a sharp
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after the August of 2016. The worker count had another fall before that, in February. The amount of
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produced and the amount of
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required were fluctuated around 4
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and 2.5
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tonnes
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January and August of 2016. After September, both the manufacture and the
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reduced dramatically, so much so that the
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ended up close to zero, but it increased again to 2
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tonnes in December. The
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of people working in the
steel
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industry was 5
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in January, but after February it fell sharply to 3
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and remained relatively steady afterwards until August.
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workers.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global connectivity
  • Cross-cultural understanding
  • Tourism boost
  • Carbon emissions
  • Environmental degradation
  • Overtourism
  • Local resources
  • Infrastructure strain
  • Travel accessibility
  • Economic backgrounds
  • Commercialization
  • Dilution of local cultures
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