You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter .Correct the information in the article .Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information .Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear sir or madam, I am writing

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letter to let you know that I recently came across an editorial of the most popular and renowned Adventure travel magazine.

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was published

last

week on Friday in the section of monumental moments where the history behind the Anzac Day celebration at the Melbourne Museum was explained in Australia, which seems a little different to my knowledge. Let me explain

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article includes the wrong dates and facts related to late soldiers who kept their whole lives for safeguarding our country. To be more precise, the mentioned date should be changed to 13th Oct 1789 when the war

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and few spelling mistakes in names.

Consequently

, readers will get the wrong information about our history and

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, giving incorrect details could lead to breaching the laws related to rights to information. Kindly request you to

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change the aforementioned updates in the

next

publications. Another way would be amending certain parts to highlight the correct steps. Hope you would certainly take

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measures to improve and not repeat

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future.

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sincerely, John