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Some people believe that Counties should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It is essential for a human’s body to receive an adequate amount of meal to regulate the normal body function. It is believed by some that enough food should be cultivated to feed the whole population, and have less food exported from the other countries. I partiality agree with
this
 statement. Undoubtedly, crops ploughed in homeland field will definitely be relatively cheaper. Ultimately, it would be affordable and fulfil the need of a large section of the society.
For example
, milk production in India is done on a vast scale
that is
 why it is readily available at a favourable cost to the people.
Therefore
, it is certainly the best idea to strive to yield sufficient supplies to suffice the need of the nation’s human-beings.
However
,
on the other hand
, all types of grains in one country cannot be produced which are staple because of the factors like climate change and different weather conditions. There are some vegetations which cannot be nurtured in colder regions,
moreover
, they require only hot and humid areas to thrive.
For instance
, rice farming is impossible in arid grounds and harvest only in tropical and coastal lands.
As a result
, permitting the transportation of small quantities of eatables would not satiate the necessities of the mankind. To sum up, there are, of course, myriads of benefits involved in harvesting ample of vegetables and fruits for the citizens, but to meet the dietary expectations of the people, it is of utmost importance to buy essentials in bulk from abroad.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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