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some universities deduct mark on a student's work if it is given late. what is your opinion? What alternative actions do you recommend to take?

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The importance of
deduct
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deducting
mark
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 from late submitted assignment which
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 debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of cutting
mark
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 due to
deadline
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a deadline
 has sparked the controversy of
potential impact
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the potential impact
 of
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 trend of
student
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 achievements in recent years. It can be said that universities can find a solution for late assignments
instead
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 of cutting
mark
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.
This
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 essay will discuss deduct
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mark
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marks
 on late assignments, and
thus
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 will lead to a logical conclusion. At the outset,
assignments check
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assignments, check
 the
student
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's knowledge about
given topic
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the given topic
a given topic
given topics
. Students know that assignments should be done before
due date
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the due date
 and they can make their plan according to deadline.
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, to avoid late submission, assignment can be divided some part and one part can be done
everyweek
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every week
.
As a result
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, students can avoid
last
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 submission. From university side, universities and lecturers should tell all students about university policy about late submission, which they can loss
mark
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, and they have to make sure that students understood all rules.
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, if
student
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 have a health problem or lost family member,
this
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student
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 should not deduct
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mark
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marks
 from assignment. To sum up, what we discuss above is that cutting
mark
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 from late assignments should be done to understand university policy, unless they have some deadly problems.

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