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some universities deduct mark on a student's work if it is given late. what is your opinion? What alternative actions do you recommend to take?

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The importance of
deduct
Suggestion
deducting
mark
 from late submitted assignment which
wa
plural of "I"
we
was
 debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of cutting
mark
 due to
deadline
Suggestion
a deadline
 has sparked the controversy of
potential impact
Suggestion
the potential impact
 of
this
 trend of
student
 achievements in recent years. It can be said that universities can find a solution for late assignments
instead
 of cutting
mark
.
This
 essay will discuss deduct
mark
Suggestion
marks
 on late assignments, and
thus
 will lead to a logical conclusion. At the outset,
assignments check
Accept comma addition
assignments, check
 the
student
's knowledge about
given topic
Suggestion
the given topic
a given topic
given topics
. Students know that assignments should be done before
due date
Suggestion
the due date
 and they can make their plan according to deadline.
For example
, to avoid late submission, assignment can be divided some part and one part can be done
everyweek
Suggestion
every week
.
As a result
, students can avoid
last
 submission. From university side, universities and lecturers should tell all students about university policy about late submission, which they can loss
mark
, and they have to make sure that students understood all rules.
For example
, if
student
 have a health problem or lost family member,
this
student
 should not deduct
mark
Suggestion
marks
 from assignment. To sum up, what we discuss above is that cutting
mark
 from late assignments should be done to understand university policy, unless they have some deadly problems.

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