The best way to help developing countries is to give financial aid. Write an essay either agreeing or disagreeing with this statement. Suggest alternatives to this policy.

These days, every time when you turn on the TV or flick through the pages of a newspaper, learn about the helping to developing countries with financial

aid

by

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from

some organizations. Some people believe that it is not the best manner. I completely agree with

this

idea and in

this

essay I will try to support my opinions with examples. In the

first

place, I think it is easy to see that funds should be allocated to education. What I mean by

this

developing countries don't have

money

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the money

or equipment to elaborate schools and educational

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

.

In

addition children

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addition, children

want to

study but

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study, but

they don't have

opportunity

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the opportunity

. Because of

this

, it could be plausible that enthusiast might be consistent with my viewpoint regarding

this

issue. Another reason why I disagree with

this

matter is that, providing fiscal

aid

to these countries is likely to make them become enslaved to others. What's

more they

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more, they

cannot do anything without other's orders. From

this

it becomes quite evident that my disagreement to

this

issue can be supported.

However

, there is another argument

such

as

first

argument, it must be remembered that

aid

can be squandered on awfully wrong purpose.

Unfortunately

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Unfortunately, this

this

is something that they ask

aid

for

education but

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education, but

they use it for another thing,

for instance

, marketing or privacy works. From

this

, it becomes quite evident that my agreement

to

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on

this

issue cannot be supported. In conclusion,

although

it is a common belief that government and financial institutions should be involved to ensure

efficiently

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efficient

usage of these funds. After

analyzing

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

this

subject, it is predicted that the positive aspects of

this

debate will forever be stronger than the negative ones and because of

this

they should controlled hardly and

this

may lead to

right way

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the right way

.