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It is a widely held belief that leaders are born. On the other hand, people believe that leadership can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is often stated that some are born leaders. It was always been a controversial topic of being born as a leader and becoming a kingpin by good social interaction. Personally, I think, a chief means to have the
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 to understand some needs of the public, try to find solutions, having proper behaviour and the leadership aspect is achieved rather than to emerge with.
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 with, leadership is the
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 of leading a group of people or an organization. The headship features will be assessed when there are crisis or related situations in a community or a place, depending upon the way how he/she handle the scenario.
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, at the time of sudden natural calamity
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 as flood, epidemics,
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, the candidate will be judged upon his approach and social commitment.
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, when there is an election in a region, some individuals can register to be a captain,
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, the only way to ensure the real figure is by giving matters to solve which may prove their directorship
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, everyone can,
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, develop their
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administrative
 power and put them to positive use in life. There are multiple evidences that leadership can be taught.
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, abundance of
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government
 programs and classes in universities.
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, nerves in human brain allows them to have a great
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 of
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 an intelligent can adapt good attributes thereby shaping an individual to have a particular strength. In conclusion, some characteristics of management could not be achieved as a gift or destiny, yet it takes time and effort. While some people think that captaincy skills are bestowed at birth, there is ample evidence to suggest these skills can be learnt. I believe experience is the best teacher. Nothing is impossible, if we work hard.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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