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More and more students at university today are not choosing to study science. Why is this happening? What are the effects of this?

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Studying technique symbolises dedication, efforts and huge money in pockets. According to me, many students at
university
 choose different subjects like arts, business management, literature and so on, which are easy and essential to their day-to-day activities. Today, many students start their career at an early stage, that means more than 60 percent of the
university
 students work while they learn.
This
 is the main reason people opt for simple subject at
university
 and skip the option to indulge in the study of science and medicine.
For instance
, the odd jobs in cafe's, supermarkets, burger shops, food courts and so on are carried by the younger generations to fulfil their requirements.
Furthermore
, these champion groups are highly talented and smart, as they drive their life decisions and pay college fees.
Hence
, choosing skill will cost them almost double the fees what they are paying for the alternate subjects. All developed nations, have huge demand for people studying science. These are backfilled by the migrants on a student visa, but even
then
 there are very few populated, who is willing to choose science as their subject at
university
. There is obviously a major effect for the future generations, which result in high demands for doctors, whereas, others with different subjects will be facing challenges in the job market, as there will be more selection options for the employers.
For instance
, A job description has a requirement for an experienced analyst, but there are 30 people with similar kind of experience.
This
 will make things tricky for the interviewer and the person gave an interview, will be in stressed.
Therefore
, studying discipline is not for the vulnerable person, who is a medic in the society. It's basically a devoted subject, but everyone in our society has dissimilar needs to satisfy for their family and themselves.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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