Some suggest that young people should take a job for few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

This
is extremely beneficial to get some
experience
before hand to
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
peruse
pierce
the studies
further
. Some people think it is
waste
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a waste
of time, while others think it is good for them.
This
essay will elaborate the pros and cons of having
experience
between the school and college life before ending with the conclusion.
First
of all, it is indisputable fact that everyone has a right to know what actually he/she likes to
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
peruse
parse
in his/her life ahead without having any peer or family
presure
the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)
pressure
pressures
. So, going for practical work after completing the school, gives
best chance
Suggestion
the best chance
to them to explore their options without any
hestitation
indecision in speech or action
hesitation
.
Furthermore
, teenagers become more responsible while doing the jobs, where they understand the value of precious time and money more, as it is their hard earn money.
For example
, in many countries like Canada and Australia, after 16
years students
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years, students
work part time in restaurants and in other fields with their studies, which help them to know what they actually want and become independent.
On the other hand
, it is not deniable that, while doing jobs after school, sometimes youngsters get rude comments from their supervisors due to lack of
perfectism
or professionalism, which puts the negative impact on their mind
reagrding
with regard or relation to
regarding
that job which could cause the reason of not doing that job again.
Moreover
, being responsible in respect to work, puts a young child into depression where he
can not
can not
cannot
say no to his manager and do not share his feelings with his parents, as it is his decision to gain some
experience
or to do job before getting the admission in the college. For an instance,
reaserch
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
researches
conducted by the Health Society of Mumbai shows that 20% of
youngesters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
are
suffered
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suffering
with the depression and mental problems after getting the harsh comments from their upper management while having internships or
experience
before
persuing
following in order to overtake or capture or as accompaniment to such pursuit
pursuing
their
further
studies. To conclude, I would like to say, it is essential to get some kind of practical
experience
relating to their career in which they are interested
,
Accept space
,
before going to the college, as it gives the reality check to the youngsters, so they can
paln
have the will and intention to carry out some action
plan
their future better.

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