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Over the last few decades, there has been an increase in international tourism. Some people think that tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the past few decades, growth has been observed in global
tourism
. It is claimed that
tourism
 should be supported because of its positive impact on
community
Suggestion
the community
communities
a community
. I mostly agree with
this
 view because it
also
 has detrimental effects On the one hand, tourists can harm the local environment.
Although
 local people try to keep clean their country, it will not be the case for the most tourists as they are living there temporary. To take an example, thousands of tourists visit
thailand
a country of southeastern Asia that extends southward along the Isthmus of Kra to the Malay Peninsula
Thailand
 each year and when they feed
monekys
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the monkeys
monkeys
 in
zoo
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zoos
the zoo
a zoo
, they tend to throw the trash into the nature.
As a
result
, it
harm
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harms
 the nature.
This
 trend can
also
 lead countries to become financially dependent on
tourism
.
Meaningly
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Meaningless
, some countries will base their economy on
tourism
. So, it can
result
 in crisis when they lose their visitors.
On the other hand
,
tourism
 can lead
umeployment
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
 rate to decrease. As
tourism sector
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the tourism sector
 develops,
increasing number
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an increasing number
increasing numbers
 of people can be employed in sectors related to
this
. Meanwhile, it can
also
 benefit the country's economy.
Meaningly
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Meaningless
, governments can put an entrance fee for museums, can sell its local crafts and can rent houses.
As a
result
,
government
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the government
 will get alternative income by spending less money. In conclusion, while
tourism
 can have effects on the environment and can
result
 in
tourism
 dependance,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe it should be promoted in order to hire more people into jobs and increase the economy.
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