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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

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Whether parents are our best teachers or not is a controversial issue.
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 many believe that teachers and society are the best teachers, I strongly believe that parents have a key role in fostering children. And I will support
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 view with arguments in the following paragraphs. To start with, since the babies were born, their parents have always been with them as the
first
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 teachers. They will teach them the essential knowledge that we need in order to join "the real world",
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 as how to speak, to walk and to interact. During the process of growing up, they learn to survive, talk, and distinguish good from bad, values of life, morality and
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 important other things from their parents.
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, parents are more engaged in their children’s activities than any other person. Sensationally, they feel closer to their offspring than any other people are. So they can find more deeply their children’s personality weaknesses and help them become finer. They always wish their children a success and they can’t have taught their kids bad things.
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 but not least, parents are more devoted than the teachers. Even if parents do not specialize in education, their role in teaching the children to be aware of the need of improving their knowledge at school is tremendous. Parents are not supposed to teach their kids Math, Chemistry or Biology, but they are very much involved in giving them lessons about being independent, strong and confident in themselves. In conclusion, there is no denying that parents are the greatest mentors for their children.
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 because they are the
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 one whom a child can follow. They care for their progeny more than anyone else and they are aware of their children features.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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