In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Income of citizens decides the economy of a
country
so, income of the people is the Use synonyms
importantt
factor that of great significance or value
important
govrnment
should take care. the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
let
see the pros and cons of earning Suggestion
Let
extremly high amount
of salaries by some people.
Suggestion
the extremely high amount
extremely high amount
an extremely high amount
Firstly
, extremely high salaries of some people helps to control inflation. Along with that the employment rate will be high and Linking Words
this
leads to incline in Linking Words
economy
. Due to high employment rate, Suggestion
the economy
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
investers
attracted to invest in the someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns
investors
country
and Use synonyms
this
directly shows Linking Words
positive effect
on the foreign exchange because of Suggestion
a positive effect
increaing
in exports. becoming greater or larger
increasing
However
, Linking Words
government
should regulate the minimum Use synonyms
wagges
, that people could earn for his or her work. a recompense for worthy acts or retribution for wrongdoing
wages
wage
This
Linking Words
hepls
to regulate the poverty and unemployment in give help or assistance; be of service
helps
Use synonyms
country
.
Suggestion
the country
countries
Secondly
, if Linking Words
govrnment
controls the salaries Suggestion
the government
government
upto
Suggestion
cretain
level helps to increase definite but not specified or identified
certain
creatine
income
of Suggestion
the income
gornment
. Suggestion
the government
government
Linking Words
this
will done by Suggestion
This
impelementing
taxes on the people who earns high salaries, most of the people apply in a manner consistent with its purpose or design
implementing
comes
under Suggestion
come
this
are business magnets. By following that the people works at lower level gets Linking Words
good amount
of payment for his or her work. Suggestion
a good amount
This
leads to good sanitation and Linking Words
sofisicated
having or appealing to those having worldly knowledge and refinement and savoir-faire
sophisticated
lifestyle
Accept comma addition
lifestyle, however
however
the inflation will Linking Words
increases
, Suggestion
increase
Use synonyms
government
Suggestion
the government
have
to take care of it. Whereas Suggestion
has
government
earns Use synonyms
suffitient
income to look after of a quantity that can fulfill a need or requirement but without being abundant
sufficient
people walfare
and developing infrastructure.
In my point of view to conclude above points, earning high salaries by some people boosts the Suggestion
the person's welfare
people welfare
person's welfare
person's walfare
peoples' walfare
country
's economy Use synonyms
is higher
Suggestion
is higher than the controlling of salaries upto certain level but government having
is higher then the controlling of salaries upto certain level but government have
has higher than the controlling of salaries upto certain level but government
is higher then the controller of salaries upto certain level but government have
is higher than the controlling of salaries upto certain level but government have
is higher than the controling of salaries upto certain level but government have
then
the controling of salaries upto certain level but Linking Words
government
have to Use synonyms
moniter
and maintain the minimum keep tabs on; keep an eye on; keep under surveillance
monitor
wagges
.a recompense for worthy acts or retribution for wrongdoing
wages
wage
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