In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Income of citizens decides the economy of a

country

so, income of the people is the

importantt

of great significance or value

important

factor that

govrnment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

governments

should take care.

let

Suggestion

Let

see the pros and cons of earning

extremly high amount

Suggestion

the extremely high amount

extremely high amount

an extremely high amount

of salaries by some people.

Firstly

, extremely high salaries of some people helps to control inflation. Along with that the employment rate will be high and

this

leads to incline in

economy

Suggestion

the economy

. Due to high employment rate,

foriegn

of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)

foreign

investers

someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns

investors

attracted to invest in the

country

and

this

directly shows

positive effect

Suggestion

a positive effect

on the foreign exchange because of

increaing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

in exports.

However

government

should regulate the minimum

wagges

a recompense for worthy acts or retribution for wrongdoing

wages

wage

, that people could earn for his or her work.

This

hepls

give help or assistance; be of service

helps

to regulate the poverty and unemployment in

country

Suggestion

the country

countries

Secondly

, if

govrnment

Suggestion

the government

government

controls the salaries

upto

cretain

definite but not specified or identified

certain

creatine

level helps to increase

income

Suggestion

the income

gornment

Suggestion

the government

government

this

Suggestion

This

will done by

impelementing

apply in a manner consistent with its purpose or design

implementing

taxes on the people who earns high salaries, most of the people

comes

Suggestion

come

under

this

are business magnets. By following that the people works at lower level gets

good amount

Suggestion

a good amount

of payment for his or her work.

This

leads to good sanitation and

sofisicated

having or appealing to those having worldly knowledge and refinement and savoir-faire

sophisticated

lifestyle

Accept comma addition

lifestyle, however

however

the inflation will

increases

Suggestion

increase

government

Suggestion

the government

have

Suggestion

has

to take care of it. Whereas

government

earns

suffitient

of a quantity that can fulfill a need or requirement but without being abundant

sufficient

income to look after

people walfare

Suggestion

the person's welfare

people welfare

person's welfare

person's walfare

peoples' walfare

and developing infrastructure. In my point of view to conclude above points, earning high salaries by some people boosts the

country

's economy

is higher

Suggestion

is higher than the controlling of salaries upto certain level but government having

is higher then the controlling of salaries upto certain level but government have

has higher than the controlling of salaries upto certain level but government

is higher then the controller of salaries upto certain level but government have

is higher than the controlling of salaries upto certain level but government have

is higher than the controling of salaries upto certain level but government have

then

the controling of salaries upto certain level but

government

have to

moniter

keep tabs on; keep an eye on; keep under surveillance

monitor

and maintain the minimum

wagges

a recompense for worthy acts or retribution for wrongdoing

wages

wage

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