some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss this views and give your own opinion.

Todays there is a hot debate about the most important environmental problems. Some people believe that
decrease
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the decrease
a decrease
in
number
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the number
of some species of plants and animals is more important than others problem,
although
the rest of the people say that there are far more dangerous environmental issues.
everyone
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Everyone
knows that, life on Earth depends on the life of plants, because plants hamper soil erosion and
also
help
to
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in
the purification of the air,
furthermore
,
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,
those can produce oxygen which is one of the most important factor for living on the Earth. A
further
point is that, cities can be preserved from natural disaster
such
as, floods and storms by trees. About some species of animals, advocate
argue
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argues
that, if animals, those whose have a key role in
food cycle
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the food cycle
disappear human's life may face serious problems like starvation.
on
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On
the other hand, opponents claim that global
warming which
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warming, which
is due to industrial activities, is another factor needs dealing with. Additional the polar glaciers are melting and because of that, sea level going up and
distructing
draw someone's attention away from something
distracting
floods
are flowing
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is flowing
.
Also
human's activities lead to sea water contamination which can be a
biggest
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bigger
big
cause of decrease in
number
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the number
of some aquatic creatures and it is necessary to be controlled.
in
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In
conclusion,
although
the global warming seems to be a huge problem and causes many dangerous issues, in my opinion, plans annihilation is the main reason of all serious problems, because trees can
purification
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purify
purifies
purifying
purified
the atmosphere and hamper global warming.

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