some people believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people.Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Seeking advice from elders is supposed to be more beneficial

instead

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the young adults

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This

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belief is argued by many individuals

nowdays

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

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I, completely, agree with

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notion and according to my opinion,

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the experience

of

octagenarian

being from 80 to 89 years old

octogenarian

is always worthy than the

enegy

(physics) a thermodynamic quantity equivalent to the capacity of a physical system to do work; the units of energy are joules or ergs

energy

enemy

of young ones. It is easy to comprehend, why I

am in favor of above believe

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believe in favour of above

am in favour of above believe

by various reasons. The preponderant is that old people has been

gone

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going

through various ups and downs of

life

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resultantly gain knowledge and hand on experience for different aspects of

life

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To illustrate, If a person is going through

financial crisis the he

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the financial crisis, he

the financial crisis he

may get

best

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good

the best

better

advise

a proposal for an appropriate course of action

advice

from his parents and grandparents about financial management as they managed finances for the same family for years.

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a report published by 'New York Times' proved that teenagers living with their grandparents tend to least behaviour issues as compared to the children living in

nuclear family

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a nuclear family

nuclear families

the nuclear family

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, advices of experienced people are necessary not only for

life

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skills and

problems but

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problems, but

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assist

new generation

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new generations

the new generation

towards better ways.

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few people consider that old people have conservative thinking and they could never compete with

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fast paced

life

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In fact

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is true in some cases because elders

are still stick

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are still sticking

are still stuck

to their traditional myths which results in social disorder

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as;

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gender inequality,

casteism

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and

pateriarchy

a form of social organization in which a male is the family head and title is traced through the male line

patriarchy

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, elder people could not give appropriate advice about technology and fashion

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In short,

octagenarian

being from 80 to 89 years old

octogenarian

octogenarians

may not be able to provide proper

guidence

something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action

guidance

in some

modren

belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages

modern

aspects of

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where up to date knowledge is needed. In conclusion,

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old

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older

generation is not much familiar with

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contemporay

characteristic of the present

contemporary

world

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for real obstacles of

life

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their guidance and

life

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experience is always needed

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, according to my perception

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to achieve success in both personal and professional

life

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one should always seek advice from his elders.