As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

The booming international tourism has significantly contributed to the development of the world,

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by the economic growth in different industries, including

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aviation. Yet, the increasing number of flights is considered

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the root of major environmental issues, requiring necessary solutions from the government to combat the situation. It is evident that environmental deterioration

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partly attributed to the growing demand for international flights.

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, the higher the number of flying

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is, the more carbon footprint and emission from burning fuel

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released into the

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, not only does air pollution inevitably take place, but

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and substantial impacts on the world are carried out,

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, global warming or the

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ozone layer

thickening ozone depletion.

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, the aircraft manufacturing industry has been proven to account for

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adverse effects on the Earth. Precisely, to produce solely an aircraft, enormous

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of raw materials are highly in need, from iron,

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to coal, petroleum and natural gas. The procedures of both exploiting these materials and processing them

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exacerbate the polluting issue which is ascribed to their intimidating emission of virulent pollutant particles.

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, measures to combat environmental pollution from the

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should be taken by both the government and individuals. From the government perspective/As for the former, imposing higher taxes on the aviation industry sector would lead to a higher price in terms of

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, diverting people towards other more affordable

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yet greener/environmentally-friendly means of transport for

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,

such

as boats or electrical trains.

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that, social campaigns on protecting the

environment

should be promoted and implemented promptly to raise

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awareness and educate their

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.

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, if people profoundly acknowledge their important role by reducing the frequency

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traveling

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by plane, environmental issues can be easily alleviated. Taking the young climate

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Greta Thunberge as an example, to responsibly prevent

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, she has given up on plane

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to minimize

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aircraft emission on the whole.

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ushers in many adolescents being inspired by Greta’s action to make

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in saving the planet. In conclusion, detrimental impacts on the

environment

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from both producing and operating

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.

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governments and citizens should take the initiative to create influential changes and foster environmental sustainability.