Many people agree that free public transportation should be available in most major cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Pubic transportation is the major advantage now a day. But in most countries

that is

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not free. People have to pay for it to move one place to another. In European countries

this

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is free for student under age 18. And they

also

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make different travel cards for the family or Bachelors in much less cost. There is

also

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food service available for the people who travel

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train or bus. But when I am talking about Asian countries their travelling

cost

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costs

more. Like if you want to go somewhere far away that will

charged

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charge

you more. And the bad part is that their services are not really well. There

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are

no comfortable and proper seats for the people. No arrangement of food as well they have to bring food by

own

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owner

. Student have to pay all the ticket charges as well. According to my perception

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is the responsibility of the government to facilitate the students and

dont

do not

don't

take any money for them and the families to give them cards that they have to pay once.

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Many people agree that free public transportation should be available in most major cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Fully explain your ideas

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication have a negative impact on young people’s writing and reading skills. Do you agree or disagree?

In many places, people's lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of such developments outweigh the disadvantages?