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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you return home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. -Explain the problem. -Say why the documents are important. -Suggest a solution.

#hotel #home #papers #manager #-explain #-say #documents #-suggest
Dear Sir, I hope
this
 letter finds you in the best of spirits and radiant health. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I accidentally left a few important documents at your hotel,
while
 I left the conference hall after attending a business meeting yesterday. Once I reached home I realised that the papers were missing from my office bag. Later, I recalled that I left the documents in the meeting room, as I was in
hurry
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 to leave, in order to catch my train.The paperwork I left in the hotel is very important because it contains details of an important corporate deal.
Therefore
, the documents are of immense importance
for
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 the firm I work for.
I
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In
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 order to help me, I urge you that if you find the papers in the conference hall, kindly e-mail them
on
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 my
mail
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 address [email protected]. I would be obliged with
this
 act of kindness. I am looking forward
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 having a positive revert from your side. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.
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task achievement
Ensure that your letter remains concise by removing redundant phrases. This will help in maintaining clarity and brevity.
coherence cohesion
While the letter is cohesive, try to use more varied linking words and phrases to enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is formal and polite, which is suitable for this context.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear logical flow, which aid in understanding.
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