Some argue that the climate change is an issue. Do you agree that?

I think education should be more about understanding of what happened rather than memorising what happened because education should push people into analysing, evaluating. Yes, now we are living in the information age, and new ideas have been never more important, so encouraging children to have their own ideas can
lead new ideas
Suggestion
lead to new ideas
that can help improve our lives. They can encourage them.
For example
, teachers can congratulate children when they come with new ideas. They can give them a good mark when they have a good
idea
about a course given. They can be always positive about
ideas
Suggestion
the ideas
brought by children. To make a company more successful in business,
company
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a company
companies
the company
should always come with new and better ideas because they
are likely be
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are likely being
have likely been
in
fiercly
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fair
fairly
competition, so it is sensible for a company to encourage their employees to produce useful ideas. Implementation of an old
idea
is generally considered acceptable, because people who have to implement it have already known how to do it probably, so it can be seen time-consuming and even annoying for some when one comes with
an
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a
new
idea
to implement. Many think that putting something into practice is generally a hard process. I
am partly agree
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partly agree
am partly agreeing
have partly agreed
with that, but I
also
argue that coming with a new
idea
can be compelling and sometimes even harder than applying it. I have been in cold weather many times. I live in Istanbul, and you can experience four seasons there. It is not often cold, because Istanbul's
climate
is kind of similar with
mediterranean
the largest inland sea; between Europe and Africa and Asia
Mediterranean
climate
. Yes, eastern parts of the country are colder than western parts, because these areas are generally away from a water area, and they are generally mountainous. I don't think I would prefer
live
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living
in either cold places or hot places. I don't like too hot and cold
climate
, so I would prefer to live in a place of which
climate
is mild, and in which you can experience different climates.

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