Some people think that homework is not necessary for students’ development. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era, education
have
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has
a very crucial role to play as it acts as a foundation for
country's future
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the country's future
. Abound individuals think that children should not be burdened by providing extra
work
for
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from
home
.
This
essay will highlight that
this certainly
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this, certainly
not rational approach that needs to be opted and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion. Out of all the arguments, there are myriad reasons which will
further
elaborate
this
argument but
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argument, but
the most preponderant on stems from the fact
that is
homework is many beneficial.
First
and foremost, self study is more imperative for understanding the topic. If, tutors gave the
home
preparatory school work done outside school (especially at home)
homework
work
to kids and they can
work
at
home
by
theirself
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their self
; better understood the topic as
campared
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
to learn from others.
For example
, according to
survey
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a survey
conducted mathematical subject cannot be understood until
learner
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the learner
solve or practice by themselves.
Moreover
, another pivotal aspect of
this
trend is that homework is
positive point
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a positive point
for
students
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students'
student
student's
growth.
Therefore
, they increase their knowledge as well as learn new skills. Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more
merits but
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merits, but
one of the crucial effect is that children
not learns
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don't learn
didn't learn
isn't learning
aren't learning
bad habits.
That is
to say, after end the school they busy
in
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with
school
home
preparatory school work done outside school (especially at home)
homework
work
and they no have much free time to spend outside.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, they
not sit
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don't sit
aren't sitting
bad society, learn bad things and students always busy in self study. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead. According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of school
home
preparatory school work done outside school (especially at home)
homework
work
the
childern
a young person of either sex
children
better understand the topic and
mind
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mind's
capability sharp day by day.
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