Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Reading is an indispensable part of our
lives
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life
and it is said that ' a reader lives a thousand lives before he dies'. Because of the technological advances people prefer online reading for their children.
However others
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However, others
argue that traditional way of reading is far more effective than any other resources. I firmly believe that both the options should be
wisely
to a great degree
widely
used as they are equally essential and effective. According to the current requirements children should be introduced to the online reading material to get an idea about available resources.
For instance
, applications
such
as
Kindle
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the Kindle
a Kindle
or Rivet attract children efficiently by introducing unique features. It includes moving pictures, videos, repetition of sentences to improve pronunciation etc.
Besides
, these devices are
environment
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environmentally
friendly and easy to carry.
However
, the dark side of it shows some
worst
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bad
effects on children's eyes.
On the other hand
, from the ancient times printed books are proven to be a great source of reading. It gives an immense pleasure to a reader while reading.
Also
, the aroma of that book creates a different connection between the reader and the book. Unlike e- books the printed books are not harmful to the eyes.
Moreover
, children never feel
tiresome but
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tiresome, but
due to the lengthy text and unattractive pictures children avoid reading
this
material. Most of all, both the sources
gives
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give
us satisfaction and an opportunity for reading anywhere at any point of time. So, people must consider
the the
definite article
the
pros and cons of it and use it extensively.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online reading materials
  • printed materials
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • technology
  • convenience
  • interactivity
  • accessibility
  • visual appeal
  • physical books
  • parental guidance
  • digital skills
  • screen time
  • learning experience
  • personal preference
  • comprehension
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • word recognition
  • grammar
  • vocabulary development
  • reading habits
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