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Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
Certain people think that surviving in a
country
 where they need to communicate in a foreign
language
 leads to several social and practical problems. I partially agree with
this
 point because people find it difficult to blend in the initial days but as the days pass by
this
 would be a cake walk for almost all of them.
This
 essay will discuss on problems people face and how they cope with an international
language
 in a different
country
 followed by a reasoned conclusion. To embark on, when people move from a developing
country
 to a developed
country
 they face problems with the rules and regulations they have to abide and the lifestyle difference would make them sick in the initial days of moving into any
country
 and
moreover
, being in harder days of life,
language
also show
Suggestion
also shows
 some impact because people find it difficult to express their views or feelings when they are in deep trouble.
For instance
, If someone recently moved into some
country
 and she/he barely know anyone there,
then
 she finds it difficult for at least a week to get things done for herself like the initial setup because of the
language
 barrier.
Hence
, it is important to know how to express views in a foreign
language
 before someone move to any
country
.
Furthermore
,
language
 acts a primary medium of communication and it is important to learn
language
 at least at an expert level before moving into any
country
 because there might be chances for the native people to get offended when people do not express in a proper way due to lack of
language
.
For example
, due to less awareness of the
language
, some foreign people think that they actually cracked a joke and it might convey to native speakers in a detrimental way and
consequently
 leads to a social damage.
Hence
, it is important for each and every individual to get a better command on the
language
 before moving to any
country
.
However
, people even actually learn from their mistakes and gets comfortable with the
language
 as the days pass. To conclude, people face some challenges to survive in a foreign
country
 during the initial phases of life because of the
language
 difference but could learn quickly from the past experiences.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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