City living 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, so many of us live in cities and super

cities but

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cities, but

is it becoming more stressful living there and does it have any pluses for our life?

Firstly

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, transport infrastructure is one of the pluses of living in

urban area

Suggestion

urban areas

an urban area

. So, with means of public transport like: trams, subway or buses it is really easy to reach necessary destination. Plus, ticket for travel is cheap and people should not buy or rent a car.

On the other hand

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, pollution is one of the negative aspects of living in

city

Suggestion

the city

a city

cities

. People throw away rubbish in public places and streets become more polluted thought the time by plastic or food wastage.

Thirdly

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, people have choices of entertainment places what is really good in cities. Usually, big cities are full of public places like: cinemas, aqua parks, zoos and shopping malls where families or groups of people can spend time with pleasure but what

can not

cannot

be said about countryside living.

Finally

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, today’s cities can support rich, varied and exciting lifestyle, which is stimulating rather than stressful.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

employment hubs
convenient access
amenities
cultural diversity
personal growth
fast-paced lifestyle
burnout
cost of living
financial strain
social problems
traffic congestion
noise pollution
overcrowding

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City living 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some peoplesay that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people says that it is a waste of public money to spend on cultural events, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t.

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting ones is very important for people? Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a postivie or negative situation?