Some People Think That Large, Impressive Buildings Are Important For A City. Others Believe That The Money Should Be Spent On Improving Schools And Hospitals. Discuss Both These Views And Give Your Own Opinion

One of the most common

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in our modern world is whether attractive buildings are essential for a

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or the money should be invested in developing education and health system.

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both opinions have their own merits, I would lean

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forward to the latter

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with, those who support imposing buildings

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often claiming

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that most high-rise buildings are beneficial to an urban area in economic growth by attracting tourist. Actually,

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is a good way for a

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to generate income from outside sources.

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of taking money from the citizens, people from other countries bring money into your

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which helps your

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to

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properly

. Another angle can be seen in the fact that accommodation for citizens is provided. It is true that land resource in many modern inner

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as Ho Chi Minh and Ha Noi

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is becoming

scarce and

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pricier

. The high remarkable buildings are a

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good

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solution to improve the living standard. The

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issue worth mentioning is that outlets or shops really need space in order to do business. Most enterprises lease departments in malls or shopping centres where there are a lot of passers by here.

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method helps businesses operate more favourable.

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, people with a contrasting argue that the government must make sure that their citizens are looked after. If there are not enough schools or the schools are not having adequate facilities, the students will not receive an abundant source of knowledge.

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, if the

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inhabitants do, not

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enough health, they cannot work or service their

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, which leads the economy reduced rapidly. Probably, to those holding an

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opposite standpoint

, there is some truth in the idea that the development of the

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does not depend on high buildings, but on public services for the whole population

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as hospitals and schools.

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, if there is an outbreak of deadly diseases or natural catastrophes, the work of many paramedics and health care providers will be what humans suffering from those situations truly need, not large stunning high-rises. In conclusion, there are tangible advantages for a

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by contributing to large buildings or hospitals and schools.

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, schools and hospitals should be given priority consideration as they provide indispensable services.