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Immigration has a major impact on the society. - What are the main reasons of immigration ? - To what consequences can it lead?

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In the recent times, there has been a rapid increase in migration of people moving from one
country
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 to the other, which has a significant impact on the society.
This
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 essay would succinctly look into the some of the causes of the immigration and few possible effects it can lead to. People move to another
country
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 for high standard of living and better
lifestyle
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lifestyle, such
such
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 as quality education, better
healthcare
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health care
, and for good career opportunities. It is observed that the movement is high from developing countries to developed countries which has better aspects in almost all the industries. To exemplify, a degree obtained
in
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at
 an esteemed university like Harward University is not only recognized globally in the educational
sectors but
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sectors, but
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 results in better job prospects in the professional career.
Moveoever
in addition
Moreover
, the political situation in the homeland could
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 force people to settle in other nations regardless of their desire to stay home.
However
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, individual migration has myriad effects on both the homeland and
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 in the
country
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 they are moving in.
Sudden surge
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The sudden surge
A sudden surge
 in the immigration population could lead to unemployment of the citizens which eventually bring down the economic stability of the
country
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. In
additoin
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
 to that, the movement of skilled workers and experts trigger the brain-drain situation in the developing countries.
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, the absence of proficient workers could impact the quality of products that
effects
have an effect upon
affects
 the monetary value of
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country's Gross Domestic Product
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the country's Gross Domestic Product
(
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(
GDP). To sum up, people migrate to different parts of the world to improve their livelihood which has substantial impacts globally. While immigration provides exposure and connects globally, it
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 results in declination of
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country's growth
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a country's growth
the country's growth
 aspects.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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