In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

Public
transport
is a very essential medium and had become an important part in every common man's life, and is becoming a good solution to avoid environmental issues. While, many think that
Government
Suggestion
the Government
should spend large sum of
money
in constructing new railway lines for running super fast trains between cities. I personally think that the
money
should be spent on improving existing public
transport
.
This
essay will discuss both these views, along with examples from Oxford university study and Time magazine survey to demonstrate the points and support the claims. On the one hand, people in a number of countries are bored of
long journey
Suggestion
a long journey
the long journey
long journeys
, they don't want to spend more time in their travel.
Therefore
, they
wants
Suggestion
want
to commute fast between cities, and
hence
they foresee that their Government should construct new rail lines.
For example
, Oxford university in 2015 researched that 60% of the total population in
UK
Suggestion
the UK
prefer to travel by air than by road, to travel faster. So from
this
example, it is clear that people dislike spending time sitting idle for
longer
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long
duration.
On the other hand
, some people contradict
this
thinking, by saying that, the
money
should be spent on improving existing public transportation.
Additionally
, they want to get to their present local
transport
a stable one, and secure as well.
Similarly
, a survey done by Time magazine in 2018 reveals that almost 80% of the US population expressed interest in enhancing the available commute system. So, from
this
example, it is clear that
public
Suggestion
the public
prefers to stay secured rather than experience
comfortness
things that make you comfortable and at ease
comforts
. To conclude, public
transport
helps reducing global warming, and any
money
spent by Government comes from the taxes paid by people.
Hence
,
this
should be spent in a meaningful way, should be helpful, and beneficial to them.
Finally
, the respective
country officials
Accept comma addition
country, officials
should stabilize the existing system before stepping into a new system.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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