You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
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The table indicates the
percentage
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of students who attended four different secondary
schools
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in the years
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2000, 2005 and 2009. As seen in the table, most of the children went to the
schools
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that were voluntary-controlled in 2000, but it seems the popularity decreased by 2009 in which year the most crowded secondary education institutions were the community
schools
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. In 2000, the proportion of attendance at specialist
schools
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was 20%, but it gradually decreased in 2009 by 2%. Even in grammar
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, the
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of participation dropped
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12% in 2009 which was 24% in 2000.
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, a bit more than half of the
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of school children went to
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that were voluntary-controlled in 2000. The
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sharply declined up to 20% in 2009. Community
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,
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, were not so popular in 2000, only 12% of the students attended. But rising
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32% in 2005, the
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became the highest in student participation in 2009, with 58%.
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