You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The table indicates the
percentage
of students who attended four different secondary schools
in the years of
2000, 2005 and 2009.
As seen in the table, most of the children went to the Change preposition
apply
schools
that were voluntary-controlled in 2000, but it seems the popularity decreased by 2009 in which year the most crowded secondary education institutions were the community schools
.
In 2000, the proportion of attendance at specialist schools
was 20%, but it gradually decreased in 2009 by 2%. Even in grammar schools
, the percentage
of participation dropped at
12% in 2009 which was 24% in 2000.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, a bit more than half of the percentage
of school children went to schools
that were voluntary-controlled in 2000. The percentage
sharply declined up to 20% in 2009. Community schools
, by contrast
, were not so popular in 2000, only 12% of the students attended. But rising at
32% in 2005, the Change preposition
to
schools
became the highest in student participation in 2009, with 58%.Submitted by englishwithpleasure2006 on
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