the diagram below shows the steps followed by recycled aluminum cans

the diagram below shows the steps followed by recycled aluminum cans
The given visual representation outlines the process of recycling
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cans
in the UK.
To begin
, the used
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tins are placed in a special bin by customers.
Then
, they are collected from here and taken to a collection centre by a dump truck, where they are sorted and cleaned.
Next
, selected
cans
are torn up into narrow and long strips and crushed in a special machine. In the following phase, the metal is heated to a high temperature to allow the
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to melt.
Following
this
, the melted metal is flattened to a width of between 2,5 mm and 6 mm. In the subsequent stage, the reprocessed
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is reshaped into new packaging as a drink container. In the
next
stage, the ready new containers are delivered to a soft drinks factory where they are
labeled
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and filled with
soft
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drink
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.
Finally
,
cans
are now ready to be sold to
large
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public. In the UK, 74% of all
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cans
are recycled and
then
the cycle is repeated.
Overall
, there are seven stages in
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recycling, beginning with
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dispose
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the used
cans
and ending with
reuse
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the reuse
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of them.

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